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Nov 26, 2018 19:11:18 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Nov 26, 2018 19:11:18 GMT -6
Name of Talent: Talent-less
Concept: Oki does not have talents in the normal since. He is not magical like those around him, but rather just good with technology and tinkering. As a result of his skill he has created a weapon that he simply calls Chaotic Calm, a blade that can shift into various weapons and forms with the use of technology. Using the various weapons he can program the blade to shift into along with his unarmed combat, Oki can hold his own in a world of magic.
Extra(s): None.
Positive Mechanics: + Versatile + Due to training, Oki can withstand a beating from magics and has designed his weapon to be durable against them too. + Due to him being a person that loves to tinker with things, he can always add more functions including elements like ice, electricity, and fire to his weapons as he goes along.
Negative Mechanics: - Will overheat if the weapon shift is used too much. - Can run out of power if pushed to its limits in a fight.
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Chaileo
Application Assistant
idk what to put here
Iza's Bih
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Tea Lion
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Tea Squad
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Nov 26, 2018 19:42:46 GMT -6
Post by Chaileo on Nov 26, 2018 19:42:46 GMT -6
Heya Deshi,
Just a couple of things, your extra would be more of a positive mechanic, extras are more aesthetic wise like changing the colour of hair/eyes etc. Positive and negative mechanics aren't really strengths and weaknesses, its the things that the talent allows you to do, so the extra would be a positive mechanic like "Oki can add more functions including elements like ice, electricity, and fire to his weapons", his body being more durable and being able to take a beating is good but could you state what the talent allows him to do in the positive mechanics not just the concept. Your negative's are all good, if you want to you can remove one since the ratio is 3 positives : 1 negative
feel free to message me on discord if you want clarification! otherwise just bump <3
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Nov 28, 2018 14:02:50 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2018 14:02:50 GMT -6
I believe I fixed what you asked. If not please let me know.
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ArgonianMade
Administrator
owo what's this?
OOC Account - Iza was here <33
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Dec 4, 2018 18:06:32 GMT -6
Post by ArgonianMade on Dec 4, 2018 18:06:32 GMT -6
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